That is... quite amazing, though the original still has a lot going for it - the emotion expressed on the two faces is quite different; I can feel the first one sort of drawing abashed circles on the ground with her toe, while the second is more self-confident.

Re drabbles - I'm not sure you could rework a drabble, which because of its very nature has to be totally concise - though it might be interesting to take one and expand it, using it as a starting point for something a good bit longer. Though if you wanted to do that with the idea, you wouldn't have written it as a drabble in the first place... Ah, don't heed me, I'm just rambling...