Hawaii Five 0 Drabble 'Surrender' Steve/Danny NC17

[janedavitt]

Feeling twitchy and restless with So Much To Do, so I decided a drabble would calm me down.

Title Surrender
Author janedavitt
Web page Jane's Stories
Pairing Steve/Danny
Rating NC17
Length Drabble, so 100 words exactly.
Spoilers/Warnings Rimming.



Surrender

Danny's pinned to the bed by the push and lap of Steve's tongue against his hole. He feels heavy, melting, the effort needed to spread his legs, arch his ass higher, almost beyond him, but if he doesn't, Steve will pause to reposition him and Steve can't stop because if he does, Danny will be forced to beg him to continue, shameless in his need.

The rough rub of Steve's thumb over the spit-wet skin he's been working with his tongue breaks him and Danny's begging, his voice hoarse, even when Steve's licking him again he doesn't, can't, stop begging.

Comments

[samjohnsson]

Guh. That's all I've got.

[janedavitt]

That will do perfectly; thank you!

[james]

I love you a lot.

[janedavitt]

Aww :;snuggles you:: Thank you!

[dodificus]

I like this, that he's getting what he wants but still can't help begging anyway.

[janedavitt]

I think he's embarrased that he wants this but having given in and let Steve do it, there was one more barrier to break down and that was asking him to do it, not just being done to, but participating.

Thank you for reading!

[dodificus]

And that's what I like about you, you're always thinking about the psychology behind everything:)

[jdjunkie]

One hundred words of awesomeness.

::and as a ranting purist, I REALLY appreciate the hundred part, you know? ;-)::

[janedavitt]

Thank you! I am totally adamant on the 100 words bit ::fist bumps you::