I give in

[janedavitt]

Anyone out there feeling kind, who would take a look at the 5,673 words I have on my ABoD fic and tell me at which point it descended into being completely naff? Because I'm this close to hitting delete and starting from scratch. If any of it can be salvaged, it would be good, but it might be beyond help. It's due on Sunday, so it's sort of needed in a hurry...

Never had so much trouble with a story that should have been so easy ::baffled::

ETA; all sorted now and thanks so much for all the kind offers; you're a sweet, brave bunch ::smooches::